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Poem I just wrote! Tell me if you like it Please!
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 10:57 AM PST
The Lost Maiden and the Sad Prince There was a lost maiden, yet to feel loves true feel Dancing with the jester hoping it could be real but the jester was stupid and couldn't settle with just one so he left the lost maiden to go have his fun Don't worry lost maiden you soon will be found and become a part of love's beautiful sound I know the pain hurts you and I know why you cry but move on from the jester, his love was a lie There was a sad prince, who lived up above His electric guitar was his only true love he tried to write his music so happy and true but it all came out sounding so emo and blue Don't worry sad prince you soon will be glad for there is a lost maiden who wants to be had she's looking for someone whose love is for real Someone to hold her and to share love's true feel Now they are married and very much in love No longer the lost maiden or the sad prince above Now the story is over, but the future foretold They will be happy together, even when wrinkled and old So does it sound ok to everyone? I think it is pretty corny and lame. 
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:08 AM PST
nice |
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:09 AM PST
Thanx Bunches!!! |
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:10 AM PST
koolieo |
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:13 AM PST
Yeah this poem describes how my ex boyfriend cheated on me(with 7 different girls) and then I met my Fiance Kane! I Love You Kaney-Poo!! 
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:15 AM PST
oh dang! Quote:
Originally posted by 1_Punk_Kid Yeah this poem describes how my ex boyfriend cheated on me(with 7 different girls) and then I met my Fiance Kane! I Love You Kaney-Poo!! |
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:17 AM PST
Yeah my ex boyfriend would be the Jester in the poem! LOL!! Did I mention that I HATE CLOWNS!!! LOL!!! 
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:19 AM PST
dont feel bad i kicked a clown in the..smurf and i got in trouble
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:21 AM PST
Nice! I would probably cry if I seen one! I'm scared of Clowns!! 
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Posted: Jul/17/2008 11:24 AM PST
cool poemm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
