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who does poetry?!?!?

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Silent_A
Joined: 12/26/2009
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Posts: 35
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:15 PM PST

heres mine:



Life
I await the judgment day
I await to be told how I succeeded and failed in life
For if I had succeeded
It matter not
For the main focus is how I failed
Because we only look at the dark rather than light
How I did?
I wish I knew
Should I have done better?
That I cannot deny
Would I have done more if I could?
In a heart beat
Have I done wrong?
Naturally
Have I done right?
I tried
But in the end I have learned
It’s not whether you pass or fail
Fall or rise
It’s if you put in effort
How hard you tried
This is life
It’s about your journey to your destination
On this trip you will learn to laugh, cry, lie, live, sin, and expect
Every living being has one purpose we share in common
We live to die
What your purpose for living is decided by you and the choice you make




id love to hear other creative and artistic minds X3
AmberOnFire
Joined: 12/28/2009
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Posts: 15
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:15 PM PST

Me .

But yeah (;
Silent_A
Joined: 12/26/2009
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Posts: 35
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:16 PM PST

post one i wanna hear it XD!
AmberOnFire
Joined: 12/28/2009
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Posts: 15
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:19 PM PST

................ Later ;P my minds blank right now (:
AmberOnFire
Joined: 12/28/2009
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Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:25 PM PST

old but.


I'm trapped inside this world,
trapped inside this cage of flesh,
and the walls won't tremble down.

I'm scareaming,
but i'm never heard.
I'm crying,
but i'm never seen.
I'm disspearing,
but i won't be missed.

My world is spinning round and round,
my stomach fliping upside down,
my head is bouncing off my skull,
and i just wanna fade away.

Trapped in my own nightmare
Silent_A
Joined: 12/26/2009
Location: trapped inside
Posts: 35
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:33 PM PST

that was amazing! ^_^
AmberOnFire
Joined: 12/28/2009
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Posts: 15
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:37 PM PST

ahaha. its from when i was like ten (;
Silent_A
Joined: 12/26/2009
Location: trapped inside
Posts: 35
Posted: Dec/28/2009 4:56 PM PST

awesome, how long u been doing poetry?
AmberOnFire
Joined: 12/28/2009
Location: Under Daniels Bed ;]
Posts: 15
Posted: Dec/28/2009 5:06 PM PST

since i was six.
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