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a special poem
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Posted: Apr/09/2008 10:05 PM PST
Used to laugh, used to love Lost it all the day you died A blank stare with no words Lifeless body silenced cry Skin hard like an ancient oak Icy cold touching your hand Look of peace upon your face Just to much for me to stand Mind spinning out of control Emptiness now all I feel A shell of what use to be Life has lost all it's appeal Sitting in this smoke filled room All alone with thoughts of you Walls are closing in on me Everything has come unglued Used to laugh, used to love Staring into sparkling eyes Always thought we'd be one Till the day this dream died. |
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Posted: Apr/10/2008 6:25 PM PST
Quote: lyk it??really??
Originally posted by cRuNk_iz_CrUnK Used to laugh, used to loveLost it all the day you died A blank stare with no words Lifeless body silenced cry Skin hard like an ancient oak Icy cold touching your hand Look of peace upon your face Just to much for me to stand Mind spinning out of control Emptiness now all I feel A shell of what use to be Life has lost all it's appeal Sitting in this smoke filled room All alone with thoughts of you Walls are closing in on me Everything has come unglued Used to laugh, used to love Staring into sparkling eyes Always thought we'd be one Till the day this dream died. |
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Posted: Apr/10/2008 6:35 PM PST
i like it  its creative yet i can see how the person is feeling and yes i did take the time to read it!
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Posted: Apr/10/2008 6:35 PM PST
lol |
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Posted: Apr/10/2008 6:38 PM PST
omg that rox!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: May/15/2008 9:07 PM PST
what about htis one? every time i look in those gorgouse eyes,every time i see u by my side.i think over all u r everything to me,i never had someone there for me like u your just wat i need. the same old way you smile and i think i have no chance at all.u mean everything to mecouse your wat i need. i would go that extra mile just for u. and everytime u make me smile melt and want to c u even more.you made me feel like a fool.you never new how i knew u all ways saw through me. i guess u will never see that every time i look in those gorgouse eyes of yours,every time i see u by my side i think over all u mean everything to me u r just wat i need o baby baby plz just see |
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Posted: May/15/2008 9:15 PM PST
i dont really care |
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Posted: May/15/2008 9:15 PM PST
i dont really care |
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Posted: Jul/15/2008 5:08 PM PST
When I was reading that, I got all sucked into it. In a good way. I love it. Good job.
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Posted: Jul/15/2008 5:12 PM PST
make me a poem |
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